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					 You know what? I see the vision—the creativity that this story want to execute well... But as u can see, they're having a hard time doing that—the pacing isn't the smoothest, it's a bit rough as if instead of revising they accidentally present us the outline and the draft only... You guys get me?
You know what? I see the vision—the creativity that this story want to execute well... But as u can see, they're having a hard time doing that—the pacing isn't the smoothest, it's a bit rough as if instead of revising they accidentally present us the outline and the draft only... You guys get me? It was fun and entertaining at first, but then suddenly the pacing got ruined. As the story unfolds, too much is happening all at once to the point that we can't focused on ANY of the problem at all.
I hope sooner or later they'll be able to pick up the right pacing again and we'll have a smooth transition and highlights for every arc.
P.s. i really like the silver hair dude, if this is gonna have romance genre then I'm rooting for him as the ml (tho they're still too young so I HOPE THEY WON'T FOCUS ON ROMANCE YET)
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					 Man that good by with mello just broke my heart. I never thought I'd cry for a fictional dog like that, but it reminded me of my beloved cat that i had to say goodbye to only a few months ago. She lived till 22, but at least I could say goodbye, I was at college and missed my opportunity to be there for my other cat that died about 5 years ago now. She lived to be about 17 before cancer took her, I cried for 3 days when she passed. Never underestimate how much that goodbye means and helps. Man now I'm crying again. Wasn't this supposed to be a happy story about a child healing?
Man that good by with mello just broke my heart. I never thought I'd cry for a fictional dog like that, but it reminded me of my beloved cat that i had to say goodbye to only a few months ago. She lived till 22, but at least I could say goodbye, I was at college and missed my opportunity to be there for my other cat that died about 5 years ago now. She lived to be about 17 before cancer took her, I cried for 3 days when she passed. Never underestimate how much that goodbye means and helps. Man now I'm crying again. Wasn't this supposed to be a happy story about a child healing?2025-01-30 04:16 marked
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anyone has rec or list with anything similar to this? icb im still here