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A man, unhappy with the work he has had to do in life, is involved in an unexpected event ...! He be...
This is alright but its too short & straightforward. There isnt much conflict & felt that it already had a goal in mind, which was the reason for the short story. Even if its a good read, we are robbed of getting to truly know each character, they were just thrown at our faces & I couldn't really connect with any of the characters cause they dont have that much depth in them. Overall, this is just so-so