People are saying it’s not progressing, I disagree, there is a lot happening here at slow pace. I don’t like that he didn’t ask Kim Dan and that his whole excuse is that he was holding back so he feels like he’s done something right here, like yeah dude ur meant to hold back from fucking him in the ass when he’s asleep that’s less than the bare minimum, but also there is still room for him to grow here and his arch is only just beginning other wise everyone one would say he was forgiven too fast. Obviously if this was real people then it’s different but this is fake characters for entertainment and drama so just let it slowly unravel and see how the author wants us to watch them work this out, I’m really enjoying this arch personally I like that it’s not rushed or forced it’s two steps forward, one step back with him and that’s interesting to watch
… damn I though he was finding new ways to relax before his matches … but no. Was expecting Dan to go to the room expecting to get railed and then it turn out that he just wanted him there but guess not :( poor Kim Dan he’s gonna feel like shit after this (︶︿︶)＝凸
edit: THIS IS NOT to say I don’t like how the story is going. I think there is meant to be a lot of back and forth and if it turns out this is a hook up that sets them on the right path then great but I doubt it and if it throws their relationship in to a rocky place again, like I think it might, then it will add to the redemption arch since it shouldn’t be a straightforward as ‘im sorry’ *has sex* -now everything is all good- so I’d like to see this add some conflict to how Dan feels about jaekyung becuse he seemed upset when he said the only reason he was holding back was because he wasn’t well when he thought it was because he was starting to develop feelings for him, which he is, but Dan is now questioning the reason why Jaekyung is helping him recover and bringing him back and as a result this ‘hook up’ could have back lash story wise
but either way my comments aren’t a hit at how the story is going I really like the story so u won’t catch me complaining, just judging the characters like we all are ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I just finished it at first I thought It was gonna be another horny short story,
I’ve started it a few times and never got passed the first few chapters but got through them today out of boredom at first but THEN it got interesting!
Actually a really good story that nearly had me crying and I’d actually love it if there was an extended version.
Some times u just got to trust the process, trust the horny stories, some times they are good… sometimes ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Are the chapters getting shorter or am I just enjoying it more now? Loved seeing him suffer the ice cream sc3ne really had me giggling (≧∀≦) he's so bashful now almost makes u forget what a prick he is. I am curious to see if he does something to make up for all the stuff he put dan through or what he'll say when he directly addresses the past coz he is clearly a person who triggers Dan's trauma responses in many, many, ways .should be interesting to see how he reacts to realising how much he actually broke the poor fucker
FUCKING HELL THIS IS SO GOOD!!(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ how have i not seen people talk about this one?!?!
Yes! Love don’t mess with the pup this one is gonna be so cute! The cats human form is so cute!! Looking forward to updates, defo gonna stay up to date in this one ヾ(☆▽☆)
Was expecting something like swallow u whole but it’s actually an interesting story considering it’s base line plot and all the fucking ╮(￣▽￣)╭ but poor heart! He’s so hot and sweet and cute how can he not instantly fall in love with him(╯°Д °)╯╧╧, love a golden retriever top (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Dude boskil dying gets me every time I’ve re read this Tory a few times since the break and I cry every time and that little dream scene cracked me again!!! GOD DAMN IT