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so... i started reading the novel cause i just couldnt handle this super-slowburn every 10 days no more... i wanted more of this certified yearner Jaekyung... but there is something so inherently unsexy about how the author writes smut. like... you can you please NOT mention JK's schlong is a size of childs fist everytime?
okay that's low-key hella disturbing
either author or the characters have an age kink and... idk... im not vibing lol. there are other instances here and there whem im like ????. at first i thought it might be clumsy translation but the translation is otherwise ok in the other parts when it comes to longing and emotions and shit (so they know how to use words properly). but i feel like in most of the sex scenes ive read so far, ive gone like "why the fuck you chose these words, sis" so this must be a conscious choice on AUTHORS behalf, and let me repeat just.. why.. what the hell.. so unnecessary.
really hope the webtoon will frame all these bullshits in less insane way haha
Yeahhh I've been thinking the same but I wasn't sure how to word it
do you remember in wich chapter of the novel is their first time?
it starts at 63. beware, the thing im complaining about happens haha
I`ll prepare myself. Im reading chapter 55 right now
OH YE I was getting a jumpscare at that tooooo LIKE IS THERE NOTHING ELSE TO COMPARE TO TO ILLUSTRATE THE SIZE?? STOP ITT, everything else I loved but I was like “WAIT WHATTTT” at that
just binged this and damn, it was so much better than i expected. finally i pick up a story right before season starts not right before hiatus hahaha
also i really appreciate how depressed the MC is. bros reasons for wanting to sign off permanently are valid and im glad (for the sake of the story!) that hes still struggling with this.