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Girl, I thought this was gonna be horrible, complete garbage cause of the comments, turns out it is not that bad.
It may have been cause of the translation, since I am reading the official translations the story can be understood way better.
There was a switch up though, the bottom started off desperate but I feel like he changed as the story progressed. There were so many ways to talk things out and no drag all the drama, but I guess the story would have been shorter otherwise. The top was a mfcking dick at the beginning, but I am glad he didn't cheat after that kiss (for what I understood), besides I loved the bottom was kissing with another man as well jsjsjsjsjs so messy