tbh i do think the story is very well written. the issue is just that so many things are happening within the last chapter, i was hoping that there'll be more. like 50 chapters would've been good to flesh out there relationship even more. its just sad that i feel like it just ended like that.
its frustrating to see that the mc cant even confide with the sunbae cause he's also kinda red flag in terms romantically. but its kinda nice to know now why people avoided him vause he was in the brink of death. now im curious why the sunbae wasnt affected by the so called curse. is from a family of shamans or smth? i hope they explore that one next
i lowkey wanted the other dude to be more of a morally grey character out of drama but damn i wish our mc would find someone who cherished him
its good as a psychological manga but damn i wish the assault scene was not show. like the message and shit was good imo but holy hell it was just put there as a fetish content. like i would've have more kudo to author if it was explicitly and posed as a fetish typa thing. just plain weird
wasn't* i mean. wasn't shown and ppsed as fetish content
bro why are the scenes of them jorking it is just straight up random. like i like the sports aspect of the story but holy shit the romance of the the story is just all over the place. we didn't even get to see them like confess and shit and the next chapter is just them jorking. like what?? it would be nice if the romance was a bit more conscise because they are really interesting characters. i would like it more if the romance was built more in order, really thought the payoff of their relationship would be much more fruitful ngl
I think it’s future them? I feel like the author is pressured to add sex scenes so the author is like going back and forth between showing us glimpses of the future and then having sec
Random… It’s a type of story telling. I’m amazed people ask this a lot. Chronological order is not the only kind
Yes, but the only thing is it’s not really adding to the story atm, except showing us they are together in the future and in a relationship where they have sex. So I can see why ppl are calling it random - it feels almost out of the place with the current storyline.
makes sense, but i don't know maybe its because it feels kinda off (?) at where its placed. Because when i saw the first one, it made sense because they gave a bit of context but the next one? the timelines threw me off lol
honestly I like this better than rushing the storyline, it's better than changing the pacing of the story js to show "fan service" scenes
ngl i really like the story. its very refreshing and the extras helped me cope with the ending tbh. if they weren't any extras at all, it would've made me question about sada's past but im glad they wen tover it with there. not only were the characters very memorable in terms of appearances, it was very endearing to follow their story. probably gonna be one of my most favourite reads of all time. kudos to the writer
ngl that was really a smart move from the writer to remove the aspects of him possibly grooming him even though its not really but it was a really nice touch to remove the icky aspect of the going back in time aspect especially when the mc is in a child's body regardless of the context. really smart and nice. i luv it
ngl the art is really pretty but my head fucking hurts by the too much detail of like everything (imo) like its kinda overstimulating too read every chapter.plus the choppy cropping is making much worse. (btw dont take this seriously, its just something that i observed)
FRRR
i cant help but feel weird that he became the ml at end. I was low-key hoping it would be someone else cause it felt very weird since Rachel kept calling Lucian "big brother" for so long, it kinda felt a bit incest (for me at least)... cause, you know.. rachel keeps on thinking of him as a brother even though they are not related. sad to say, cause the story and the plot was interesting, i just wished it wasn't like posed as a sibling first interaction ╮(￣▽￣)╭
i remember reading this lol even tho the plot was bat shit crazy plus the shitty translation. holy it was an interesting read to say the least.
how could you have read this a year ago when the first chapter came out last December?
i think so, or i may have probably confused it with another story. But i couldn't read past like 10 ish chapters cause the translation and the quality was shit
tbh i like all the characters and their story is great but i cant get behind that there no semblance of romantic chemistry between the two of them. Like when the FL was like yearning for the MC is like cute and all but somehow I can't feel how the MC likes her romantically. But thats just me. I think its because of how how the premise was
Yh honestly up until the confession when she called him oppa and he would yap to her it always felt like how he talks to his little step sister lmaoo. I mean he realized now and ig thats a wrap but whatever. I mean he deadass had more chemistry with the schoool president from highschool-even though she only respected him-but eh…