I love reading this kind of content because it helps me understand the construction of universes as well as characters.
That being said, I don’t think this author understands very well the setting of their own world ☹. It is all over the place and I don’t get it. Are the nobles and commoners scared (as a ruled) of royalty? Like, do they respect or resent them? One episode they are trembling because of the crown prince and the next they are insulting his wife in his face
I genuinely tried to read it but made it to 68 only. First it’s like being quirky and clumsy is her whole personality…. What else can be said about her? Second, it’s like her intelligence is nonexistent. Is not about her being an airhead, she literally has cero logical reasoning. I just can’t with so much stupidity Also I really really hate when FLs are so available and open with every male character that approach them
Ugh am I the only one who thinks she forgot too easily the mages? Specially the long haired one??? Like, he killed her, sealed her and her powers, kidnapped her twice, manipulated her, yelled at her and try to force her multiple times because in his mind HE OWNS her. And she just… gave him a light smack on the hand and a smile?











No, for real, this Pie dude is too much and I hate that the autor made it as a dude who falls in love with the FL. It would be sooooo much nicer if FL was loved as a sibling instead of a romantic interest. They have TOO many romantic interactions that feels wrong hahaha too one sided, too forced.