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The uke is such a bad spy. Just like that uke in red candy. Why won't you wear a mask if you are gonna raid someone's office? Is it any wonder his face was caught on surveillance camera? How come they dont hear someone approaching when they are sneaking around in someone's home? And how come they get so frazzled and nervous when they are caught? Spies are supposed to be quick on their toes and always remain composed no matter the situation. Writer at least make me believe your characters. Like how many stupid avoidable mistakes can they make and still appear credible? Like at least get the minimum basic requirements right. There's so much amazing and popular espionage literature in the world, especially the Soviet ones, take inspiration. Also how come these people just randomly bump into each other in a large city? Sure it's a writing convenience but very tacky to read.