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Ok I’m In this first chapter.. please I’m so.. this is so funny.
1. Who df orders coffee with jam??
2. What do you mean he doesn’t look suspicious. His whole face is.
3. Why did you get so shocked seeing the bruises on the girls neck. U blew your cover . You don’t act undercover at all.. or maybe you do? he just doing a bad job.
4. Damn he closed the shop and pulled up that paper real quick. U really doing a bad job at hiding that ur a cop.
5. ayo why r u going alone to investigate… shouldn’t u be with 2-3 cops behind the scenes or something?? Like with an ear piece.
6. Shouldn’t the cops already be on this case if you found something suspicious.
I can see why I keep dropping this but coming back to it when I forget what this is about