The story is light and fun, but I do agree with the other commenter who said that the switch ups between their characters and dynamics are too fast. But, it’s only six chapters with moderate length, so I couldn’t expect much plot solidity. The characters are likable tho, and there are not unecessary drama between them.
The biggest flaw for me is just the incosistent art from chapter to chapter. Nothing too drastic, but in every chapter after both of the main characters look somewhat different that the the chapter before it. So, it gives this manga a bit of ungrounded feeling each time a new chapter starts, since you have gotten used to the art from the former chapter, only to be faced with a somewhat different one the next. It keeps happening until the end.
I, myself, like stable consistent artstyle in my readings, so this manga while cute, is not exactly what I prefer. It’s still a good manga, though, artysle incosistency aside. People who like fluffy, cute BL manga can read this.
As always, I wonder why the artstyle always changes to make them more twinkified/younger looking. In the earlier chapters, they all look more adult, now all them look more like teenagers. Also, the lineart looks messier now. Quite a lot of BL webtoon/manhwa/manga do this, and I’m used to it, but doesn’t mean I like it.
Art style is bound to change, but twinkifying your characters is a whole other story when it’s done too much. I have often seen characters drawn younger along the way; some more than others. It’s not only those characters looked younger, but their formerly strong/masculine features were gone along the way.
I just hope it doesn’t get worse for this webtoon/manhwa. I like the story, I will still be reading this, and also I like both of the main characters. They are more unusual than you typical main characters.