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I liked how they changed this part of the novel. I wasn't a huge fan that Helios was the one to talk some sense to Hestia and made it seem like Kael didn't want Diana to be dethroned because of Helios. It felt like Helios had so much influence in the decisions that were made and in the patching up of their relationship.

It lowkey felt as if Helios begging Kael was the reason why he put a stop to the plan of dethroning Diana (I know that's not the case but because of that conversation with Helios it sort of felt like that).

I would have liked a bit more withdrawal from Hestia's part just because she's a simp for Kael 24/7 and this is one of the rare moments where we see her really question everything and focus more on her feelings than Kael's. I also would have liked to see Kael scared and rattled that Hestia might disappear. Because Hestia has been a constant for him and I think the thought that someone whose always been there might actually leave is a scary thought.

But I'll take this over Helios showing up and talking to Hestia ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭