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It was full of nostalgic art when I started to read this. Kinda summer-ish high school feeling. It was intense when he was getting on with the teacher and the brother because that's where the drama is. Then when they finally got together, that's when it got boring because it didn
didn't feel genuine. Still kinda felt like the ML is a rebound. Feels no effort on the MCs side. Now, the ML is still agonizing over him. The longing still feels heavier on the ML's side. It was a race of the "price" (virginity) of that cool guy. Now it got ruined. So this is now a normal adult-sex-is-nothing trope, which is uncomfortable, because it is not nothing when you started off with fluff.