beta
This is actually good. It’s a proper story with a good storyline and a right pacing. Maybe people are used to an accelerated pacing, but usually in english novels and such, this is how usually it goes. The pairing is not forced, it shows how relationships are bonded in real life and there’s a reason for everything. No one is acting cringe, and just a right amount of ragebait (for me). The FL is not necessarily weak, she fights back despite having no power in the household. I like how they show MLs weaknesses too; makes him more relatable. Overall, I find myself immersed in this. I feel bad for people who don’t have a grain of attention span to tolerate these kinds of stories anymore: it’s rather telling. But that’s just my opinion