lalasakura want to read (All 2)
beta
The whole story is messed up bc it violates consent in all accounts even if it is BDSM. They introduce a power that was only used the first chapter and then never again... Genuinely thought she would use her powers for the priest father figure of the deacon somehow.
A girl that had no financial backing and grew up in a christian orphanage magically had plenty of sex toys to use and a very fit, tall muscular man was able to be overpowered quite easily by a highschooler... Not to mention the author has no idea how christian churches work at all lol they're not monks and catholic masses are perform using a group of people who asists the priest...
overall the story is sloppy, fast paced, extremely dumb, dull and not even the horny parts are that good since it's shortly lived
I´ve read this in one sitting after waiting for the story to release more chapters, and even so I believe this is dragging on so unnecessarily...
like... I don´t care about the teddy bear being a little girl, I don´t care about blue hair dude´s pov... what was shown about that dude was exactly what was told like 50 times throughout the story lol we all know mc will say some powerful things to the male lead and blablabla JUST GET TO IT
Only think I can think is that the artist signed a contract with the agency about the number of chapters this story should have and she´s just fulfilling that. But omg it´s killing the pacing so badly....