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The whole story is messed up bc it violates consent in all accounts even if it is BDSM. They introduce a power that was only used the first chapter and then never again... Genuinely thought she would use her powers for the priest father figure of the deacon somehow.

A girl that had no financial backing and grew up in a christian orphanage magically had plenty of sex toys to use and a very fit, tall muscular man was able to be overpowered quite easily by a highschooler... Not to mention the author has no idea how christian churches work at all lol they're not monks and catholic masses are perform using a group of people who asists the priest...

overall the story is sloppy, fast paced, extremely dumb, dull and not even the horny parts are that good since it's shortly lived