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I don't get why she cares enough to fix up that mercenary guild, it's got red flags all over it (bad coworkers, bad workplace environment, no money, etc). It's not like she became friends with someone who works there and wanted to help them. She literally just met them... She can just get a job literally anywhere else.
Also don't understand her plan to live as a commoner. Why does she want to work for living? I thought she just wanted to go on vacation and chill at the hotsprings... But even if she wants to stay occupied with a job, being a clerk seems a bit menial for someone with her level of education. It seems like a very customer service oriented job, which doesn't seem like her expertise. Plus wouldn't it be more challenging/exciting to start her own business or manage her estate? She spent all that time studying law to break her engagement but didn't think about trying to use it to get inheritance rights for women or something?
Also does she expect her parents to never try to contact her or look for her? Her parents didn't seem like bad people, so I don't understand why she's completely cutting ties with them. Also are they just gonna live in the country villa forever and never leave? Who is managing their estate/money while her parents are also gone on vacation?