beta
The story us moving so fast it kinda off putting like the brother for example goes from
Meeting -> suspicion -> getting worn down by her cuteness -> using his power it goes rampage -> she calms it down -> realising his mistake -> rationalising his own complicated feelings -> accepting her as his sister and they hug and make up
All in chapters 10 - 15
5 chapters
other stories take like a whole season to build interpersonal relationships between the characters but here it reminds me how i played doll and between my ken doll and braz doll meeting for the first time and wedding & first kid not even 10 minutes went by
From zero to 100 real fast
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