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It's been such a long time since I reread this.
I forgot that at beginning, thisstory is quite confusing and got a nasty pace. It was quite literally all over the place with the plot, the sudden change of scenes of the vharacyers, the timeskip etc.
It felt like the author cant decide which one they would choose as a main characters at first, but then the tempo and characrtra got solidified.
I like this story despite all the mess at the beginning haha. I was just sad that few characters not given the closure and story they deserved.
Ryan is such a perfect example of a wasted potential. But i also respect the author if they wanted him to end just like that.
It just felt so lonely and abrupt.
Locua and Kyon's development deserved more time and chapters too but it's only 70 chapters so...