I liked reading it, but damn... Lots of things were all over the place ^^"
Nothing truly explain the hierarchy rules in the story, one moment, AlphaxAlpha seems totally normal, the next not truly.
Lyle thoughts are all over the place and he is hard to follow. Ash is manipulative and very rapey in the sex scene, but totally a sweetheart afterwards, without discussion about any play and contract between them.
The drawings are top notch, the story, not so much.
He could at least give the cake to someone else instead of throwing it away, seriously, I hâte people that waste food for petty reasons !
The first couple needs to really talk and take a breal on so many things ans mostly, go see à freaking shrink, you need professional help x)
The 2nd couple is kinda cute but the "no communication " is getting a bit old? They obviously have the same feelings for each other, you are adults, not highschoolers, just talk xD










I mean, we all know 100% straight guy played with other guys dicks when they were young and always actively encourages other men to seduce them and wants to be fucked.
That's 100% straight, no women involved. So straight.
No homo.
This is so ridiculous, I can't XD