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Chapter one is triggering me because why do you get to be selfish and reverse time to “finally love him like he loved you” when he’s already dead. Does this get better? The issue with this for me is that it’s harder to change in that critical time when it was needed, when it truly counted, hindsight is always 20/20. Shit, I guess, give me a story where the protagonist does the hard work in real time and doesn’t leave the poor victim in their wake. A protagonist that isn’t so selfish that to assuage their regret they literally freaking reverse time!!! Too bad man, what’s done is done, would be a pointless thing to say because I’m criticising a literal fantasy story. Is it redemption if you get the easy way out by fucking reversing time?