It's good art and hot smut, like hot damn.
B U T. The childlike Uke isn't necessary. Like why. I'm not shaming anyone who reads this, I'm picturing him different in my head too. But it's suspicious to draw him conciously, specially like this.
On another note: I know there are people who are adults but look like minors, but want to be seen as adults and have problems being seen as an adult and their lover not being accused as an pdfile. It's okay to write something about that. But this is different. Way too young looking, no excuse, because there is no actual story to tackle any personal problems.
Some people are dying of thirst and some are drowning. Lmao.
sums it up perfectly
I am SO MAD! I already HATE Sagong, oh my f*ing god.
This is the definition of grooming. I like that the author made it so obvious, it basically screams "grooming" in your face. And I like that the better twin brother tries to teach him independence. Until now he is a good influence.
*sigh*