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1. I was very excited for the art style of the cover. Then disappointed that it was just the ordninary (still very good) art style. But it just doesn't look like the cover at all.
2. The story/FL kind of gives me "I'm not like other girls" vibes. In addition with the evil girl who slept with the stupid fiancee, it kind of feels like the story likes blaming or bashing other women.
The engagement wrecker girl is also at fault but the story really forces her into the evil role who tricked the stupid guy and the FL into the victim role. The man/trusted friend of years did nothing for the FL but the woman (who may not have known of the fiancee) is portrayed more evil than him (the cheater).
Idk how to explain it. I read the story with the empress whose husband cheated but it felt totally different than this. Probably the attitude of the FL in addition with the portrayal of the engagement wrecker.
3. The story was not only cliche but also boring. Cliche can be enjoyable to read. Not the case here.
4. It would have been really nice to read a story where both girls are shocked when finding out that the cheater lied to both of them and unite against him. Girls supporting girls. The "Not like the other girls"-girl and the "other girls"-girl supporting each other. And then falling in love with each other or finding men they love.
Seriously would have been a better story.