from being creeped the fuck out to crashing out YOU CAN’T DO THIS TO ME
CONTINUE FROM WHERE THEIR STORY LEFT OFF LIKE 5 YEARS AGO AND MY LIFE IS YOURS AUTHOR
"Dad said I could date you if I stop blackmailing you and you want to date me too" DID WE READ THE SAME SENTENCE
It's impressive to write and draw a plot with eyes closed
A solid and cute story. While certainly not the best, it's quite lighthearted but not too compelling that it wracks your head over.
I don't really have much else to say other than a few nitpicks which was that it felt like the plot was tugging the characters along instead of them having their own agency and impacting the story themselves. Since this was a short story, it couldn't be helped. Maybe if there was more introspection on Jiwan's side, there would've been less of what felt like Jiwan coming across as wishy-washy and fickle every chapter. Obviously no hate to the single dad, but his character wasn't executed well. The past was interesting to read but took a chunk out of the story's runtime. While it did shed some light on the character's backgrounds, I wanted to see more of the present and especially how their relationship would mend. Taeyang was cool, level-headed and didn't seem too much of a fuss.
As for the third wheel, his purpose was to fill in an empty space I guess. He kind of just got forgotten and went about his own business until the creator's note. Other than that, the moments between the father and child were endearing and honestly tastes like a slice of life :)