I love this story but I really do hate how horny the author/artists are. Waiting 3 weeks for more story progression just to find they are wrapped together in the exact same bed yet again is just so tiring atp. Nothing of note is ever said during these scenes and it just starts to feel like filler that draggs the whole story down
Just let it marinate. Is the same with important scenes in martial arts webtoons. Plenty of ppl come for the plot and the smut. So they will make the smut last several chapters just like they make anime fights last several chapters because that's were the "money is" so to speak. Many ppl specially like those and will come back for more every time just because of those scenes. That's why when there is a scene I like, I let it marinate at least 5-10 chapters to let them finish
Also remember that maybe one person is drawing all this. So a few things may take longer. Not saying that there aren't plenty that just have that and it really feels like fillers, but this one doesn't feel that way to me. I'm also chilling with it so that may be it
Ya, these comments are all the evidence we need to see that ppl are down bad for this, so im not surprised when I see BL's do this. I can ignore it most of the time but I do start to worry about the quality of the upcoming plot when we're reaching a month of smut scene.
I think the only reason shonen isn't as annoying with it's fight scene are because they can cut away from the main action and progress smaller plot lines simultaneously. Admittedly jumping in and out of a sex scene wouldn't work as it ruins the feeling of intimacy, but I think authors/artists should be cautious of how long they make the sex chapters because of that.
Plots like this is what happens when you horny bitchs working off your two last brain cells, continue to support manhwas like jinx
I can suspend my disbelief for a lot of things in this BL, but Geonwoon being under 100kg has my eyes looking to the side
HES UNDER 100KG?????!!! WHATTT?!?!
especially since hes like pure muscle and muscle is far denser than fat is
The actual story was fine, a bit slow in some areas but it does get more active towards the end. It's an okay read and the characters/their back-stories and personalities are quite well written.
The only point off is honestly for the weird groomer relationship between W and J considering they are 25+ and 17 when they met. This alone wouldn't be enough to knock down the story as this is just fiction, but the fact that no one(the two main characters or their friends) ever brings up/questions their age gap, living/romantic(getting together the day he turns 18...) situation but act like this is perfectly fine; really rubs me the wrong way.
Especially during the police questioning where they have J lie about his age to seem older. I just wish this was aknowlage in the story a bit more as J is 17 going on 18 and the topic didn't need to be ignored apart from 1 throw away line at the end thats never brought up again.
Woojung acknowledged the age of Jiho. If I remember it correctly, it was during Jiho attempted to kill his father then Woojung said he would not be disappointed for him trying to kill someone when he himself dated someone who just turned 18.
Girl don't act slow. He aknowlage it one time in the last 15 chapters of a 90+ chapter series... bsffr
Well you said "no one has ever" when it fact Woojung did. It's as if you're saying "never" even when there is actually, and that's when Woojung said it.
Also, the friends sees their relationship as guardian with his kid so why would they even question it. They are not aware that Jiho and Woojung are in that sort of relationship.
Let me start off by apologising for assuming that you were acting slow. Clearly you're just flat out stupid or a literal child, so let me say it again for you: the issue is with the lack of acknowledgement in the overall story
1) "...the topic didn't need to be ignored apart from 1 throw away line at the end that's never brought up again." Maybe if you'd rubbed your last two braincells harder and took the 3 mins to read through my entire review you would have caught the fact that I already acknowledged this.
Yes it was briefly "acknowledged" but like I said before; one throw away line that is never brought up again, in the last 15 chapters of a 90+ character story isn't enough given W is pretty much a groomer and the story is weird about it
2) Idkw you're playing devil's advocate so hard for this clearly problematic relationship but sure whatever. J's coworker is obviously oblivious and W's team probably thinks he's doing this out of a sense of justice.
But W's friends from the wedding know. You can argue that they didn't know at first (that's probably my own confirmation bias at play), but in the epilogue when W's drinking with his friends, they don't talk about W&J's relationship like a guardian and their ward, but like a couple. And later when they are discussing marriage, the woman even asks about J moving out in case W finds a spouse and W interrupts her and shuts down the convo saying he'll take care of 'his boy'. You can play dumb to that all you want but they both understood what he meant
Idk if they are passing on this manga or what but the new chapters are like 2 chapters behind what we already have
You can't just tell us they are in love and expect us to nod our heads when you've been showing us the complete opposit fot thr past 82 chapter.
Why tf is it so hard for us to get a bl story where romance isn't the only plot point; but have it still be a bl book???
The problem with these books is that there MC's are always stright before the series and outside of a handful of blushes show little to no intrest/flat out refuses to even entertain the idea of dating any of the other guys.
These books can't even be seen as 'self discovery/gay awakenings' because they only ever play up the gay aspects for a joke/fan service, but don't ever spend time to seriously highlight the MC's changing feelings.
I'm over these kinds of books and their authors who label their content as BL when they clearly don't like/want to create books in that genre.
Stop waisting our fucking time and just go make the 134277th female transmigration story we all know you'd rather be making.
Like you really don't have to be here
This has to be a joke because I can't stop laughing. I'm only on chapter 5 but I can't take a single thing seriously.
Thoes little girls look like full grown dwaft women sometimes, the historical and geographical accuracy is completely out the window, it seem like every character has bpd and the pacing is giving me whiplash
The geographical and historical accuracy as good as possible given that you can't find any good 3D ressource of end 19th century Paris, and worst, Brittany before mid 20th century ( It's a miracle they find at least one usable ressource for Perros Guerrec ^^;. ).
As far as I dislike this story for it pacing, the rapes and the way they handle the adaptation part ; I understand the work around the background is pretty good du to the limit they have encounter.
???The Internet is chocked full of images and 3d models for both French and wider European, 19th century furnature/building as many of them still exist today? Especially so with the buildings as many European governments dedicate funds to preserve them and refuse alterations to their extriors(especially in quaint towns like Brittany) due to heritage and cultural significance.
I get that this requires specific 3d models that most likely didn't come pre installed on whatever scene modelling software a korean company is using but, spending a few extra pounds to access 3rd party models would have gone a long way as many European country's had/have similar architectchure for basic flats, theaters, city centers e.t.c
Outside of this though when I mentioned the historical and geographical accuracy, I was referring to the dialogue as it's one of the easiest things to correct, but was so far from 19th century france I couldn't stop laughing. The POTO play was also pretty bad at this though and since I'm guessing this project didn't get much funding; I wasn't seriously expecting much from them either and just tacked this on.
Yo guys pls leave black people out of this coz why tf are we catching strays??? Colourism is a disease that plagues every part of the world and the club owner is most definitely a reflection of that. While he isn't the only kidnapper/rapist in the story, he is the only dark skin person... (you include no medium/dark skin ppl in any of your works and suddenly when you do they are rapists
Exactly because it is that deep