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I actually really like the pace of the story and that there isn't really much of any romance that's going on. I do like the elf captain though she is very funny, even though the jaguar, kind of comes up more, like there's no development that makes her important to me unless something else happens down the road. If anyone can let me know if there is supposed to be FL or not (would be ok if there is none or only a short quick he chose a "FL" but not important or takes up if any of the story and only a few pages in 1 chapter lol) And if so, who is it?