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I would just like some opinion on the story. Does anyone else think that....its not good? I'm not trying to talk bad about the story or anything I just feel it dropped marks in places. Like I don't see why he would start falling for her. It kind of just feels forced to me because she is the FL. Her character also just feels lackluster in emotional concepts, and I don't feel any connection to her. I feel like the manga "Forget about My Husband, I'd Rather Go Make Money" had a similar concept about just wanting to have money (not saying the manga is that similar just the female lead concept of wanting material possessions). But her character was built way better, making her more connectable to the audience. At the moment I just don't care about this FL, or think that she is an interesting character, I'd rather follow the ML, Purple Hair Brother or the OG FL of the original story. I just don't feel she was written well for the main character.
I do try and read more on the story in hopes something changes my mind regarding it. I made it this far to ch 55. But it has not improved at all. What are your thoughts on the FL, I'm trying to see if I should wait it out more and continue reading or not?