beta
tbh this story is pretty unique. None of the characters are inherently good usually with these plots, the uke at least is pretty righteous and hardworking. This uke although I think tries to be a good person still has a lot of flaws. Which makes it hard to read at times and it makes it hard to sympathize with him. But I also know his circumstances aren’t his fault especially his family drama. The seme is honestly rather boring at first I liked him because he was at least consistent with his violence. But now he’s just an overly obsessive and possessive mans. So idk he feels more 2 dimensional. His motives are never explained—does he like uke because he’s cute? That he submissive and easy to control? I think it leaves too much to the imagination. Overall this story is different I’ll at least give it that and it did have me on my toes sometimes.