Ur edits looks great.. The google translate seems good and decent.. Translation is not wonky as it typically would of google translate does in the past or other cases..
Part of me wants kim dan and granny went to heaven and leave horsehit traumatised for life.. But i know.. I need kim dan to live and thriving while horseshit friggin CRUMBLESSSS!!!! How dare he.... Ughhhh!!!! Baby Dan is suffering so muchh
I don't mind hearing more of the trios past.. The plot was plotting i love it just as much i love their happy days slice of life episodes