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it was very cute, but it seemed like it lost it's way like, midway through? some things I'd love to get more of, were just forgotten,, and the kid also just disappeared, which is a shame since I really wanted to see how it'd go for him.
would also have loved a proper ending for the story. idk,, it just doesn't seem finished?
it would probably receive less stars from me, if their roles in bed weren't what they are ahdjk really gotta love the fiery dom bottom and the almost corpse, sub top eheh.