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Tried to read the whole thing again. I liked it at first read but now that I'm rereading it, a lot of things were thrown by the side without much of an importance. It's like a rushing river that no one can stop. The betrayal, the characters who had a lot of potential, and the ending. There would've been bigger scenes but out of nowhere Leonard, despite being overpowered and the main villain, died easily at the end. The story got so much potential but the ending got barely live up to it. Rushed and half-assed.
I think it revolved too much to the drama between the main characters that it lacked substance. My opinion changed and now I have a mixed feelings with the story.
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