The pacing towards the end was a bit underwhelming though cause so much happened, but also so fast with not much depth and it failed to make that much of an impact as a reader at least, I guess it’s still a good read though.
The story is okay, but it’s just not really hitting. Like it’s good, but not really profound. it started well, but as the story went on, the fl’s personality kinda got erased. So, the tension was lost, and the dynamic is giving cliché. Mind u, i am happy reading the same type of shit over and over again cuz idc as long as it’s good, but it just got boring.
not done yet, but I don’t mind that the ml most redeeming quality is to be handsome. Men should just sit pretty and be quiet.
PERIODT! Bonus points if they cry prettily!
exactlyy
i’ve seen toxic. I don’t even know how there is any coming back from all of this like…no. i’d rather he ended with the brother atp like wtf is this? ml needs to die bro idc.
I appreciate how the King and the kingdom don’t look down on women, they even seem to be greatly favoured. But in a way it’s because they have other people to be looking down upon which are the homunculi. Somewhat Men always need to feel superior to someone else