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You really notice all these plot holes & inconsistencies when you binge read lmao.
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. take the arc when Olivia went to Orse for example, the author was clearly setting up a whole new arc where Olivia’s legitimacy will be questioned by the queen & the other nobles in order to prevent her from inheriting her father’s assets. That plot point was easily forgotten in the next chapter, so what was the reason for even bringing it up & making the Queen a greedy bitch in the first place? And don’t even get me started on the inconsistency of her past life. In one flashback, her mother in law died & that was the day she “first” met James. But in the next, her MIL is alive & well playing with Olivia’s 2 children that James has been home long enough to have with her. I’m sure there’s more examples but I don’t want to write anymore!!! These little things are aggravating, but I still liked the story dammit! I’m pissed that I read all 128 chapters (so far) & still found it engaging (╯°Д °)╯╧╧