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I don't get why mc face is kind of emotionless, especially in the first chapter when his comrade died. I feel like their death doesn't have much of an impact on him, because of his emotionless face when he thinks of them. The only part that got me curious is finding out who the villains and if one of his comrade was alive, bc it seem like one of them is alive when he bump into that hood guy. Also, should not they do something about the error dungeon. It make no sense how the civilians doesn't complaint about it, bc usually that what happen. Just saying