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I get that mc and proxy ml was getting close coz they spend long time with each other but that balcony scene (@29) where proxy ml pop out of nowhere when fl wanting for the proxy ml to meet her at night while wearing a bathroom gown and bath towel at head which is probably fresh from taking a shower coz there's a weird water drop on her hair. gahd.
she did not even cover herself knowing she's just finished taking a bath awhile ago and not wear a sleepwear clothes yet after seeing him is such a weird and turn off scene. it's lowkey cheating vibes for me. that's not a normal scene. proxy guy is known to her as husband person. she didn't know that proxy ml is her husband.
she's not being conservative there far from the time setting of the story and the usual reaction of girls when a guy seen them on thin or nightwear clothes where boobs line can be seen like getting flushed and find some clothes to wear a decent clothes before talking again and yet she didn't flinch or get flush and she just okay to be seen like that still talk like her clothes at the moment is a decent one. yes it decent when your alone but at night and with a guy. that's a no unless it's your husband but on her pov. proxy ml is not her husband but husband personel staff.
we know as a reader that proxy ml is her husband. for fl, he's the proxy of her husband in the wedding. she still interacting with him because of him being the husband personal staff sent by her husband but their interaction are sometimes not normal. she's married but you'll see her wanting and having a visitor at night with this proxy guy and can be seen of 29.. the ambiance and clothes wear of her is not normal. which is look more than a friendship lmao. it's like having a third party but because we know that proxy ml is her husband, we just don't care and find their interaction okay. lol
if thinking this in other pov and he's not the undercover ml persona like being another person guy. this giving me off a cheating scenario. their friendship and meeting at night is already so sus especially the fl is a married person. it's not in line of conservatives relationship. so dropped this for now until fl knows that guy is her husband. I feel like I'm reading a cheating story the way the proxy and fl interact with each other while mc still don't know that's her husband she was interacting with.
If ml is not the proxy. she can be close and have a friendship with the proxy but still draw a line. but here nah. they are more like more than a friendship when he's just a proxy in name.
damn that scenarios at 29 give me a bit of stress. lmao oh well.. it just a fiction. so. outta here now