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ch 31 rn and honestly the PLOT is good but the EXECUTION is bad. MC is stupid. ML is hot and looks calculating but is also stupid.
from the jump, why tf is her first thought to try to marry her sis off to someone else even if it was said in a novel u know ure in? like why don’t u just run away and time it right so they meet each other naturally? like they only kept getting caught bc ppl would rat them out like if they dyed their hair and lived in the forest or even in the commons it would’ve been fine they’d just have to be on the low, no?
ML is stupid bc why are u literally letting go of the dude u know abused tf out of his children even giving him a gold mine just to tell him to leave like… what? u literally saw he slapped the green out of her eyes bro how tf does it make sense that u just let him off like that. not to mention it’s honestly weird as fuck how i guess anybody can walk into the main lobby of the duchy like in manhwas dont they have guards and shit that require an appointment to even get inside? even if thats the girls’ father, ML and MC literally have a contract that states NO FAMILY MEMBERS SHOULD HAVE CONTACT WITH HER SISTER shouldn’t they be smart enough to tell guards “if u see these two men don’t let them in” ?????