
wtf. that was such a roundabout way of telling the story and it was so hard to comprehend it. like i reckon i wouldve been sobbing at the end if i actually understood what happened as it was happening. though i did like the mystery and the way it unfolded. still cant believe Onodera actually died tho. i thought they were pretending

ok this wouldve been fine HAD NII-SAN NOT BEEN COMPLETELY OK WITH THEIR RELATIONSHIP FROM THE GET-GO, ALSO HES YOUR BROTHER??? AND YOU TRIED TO SCREW HIM?? why couldnt Nii-san be one of Shinobu's parents close friends or something. that literally couldve made it so much better. or like a next door neighbor/highschool student living alone because his parents are dead and then he takes Shinobu in because he related to him. no incest a t a l l then. also they didnt really explain the marriage at all. like we can gather that it was a marriage of convenience but how does that create the son? low key couldve been like "she was already preggo so they got married and decided to raise the kids together" boom instantly removed the blood ties between the two that actually f*ck and date n shit.
I AM NOT BY ANY MEANS SAYING THE AUTHOR "SHOULDVE WROTE THEIR STORY DIFFERENT" its fine the way it is and is it's own story. these are just a few possible ways it COULDVE gone. so dont get mad at me

yo if youre not going to post it then why cant someone else who puts the time and effort into translating it. it is technically dropped here and you no longer have authority over what happens to it. this manga doesnt even have an offical english version that people can support so why do this? and to anyone who wants to pick this up please do!
If mr mage can hear everything because of the barrier does that mean he can hear Seni getting abused and is just not doing anything about it?
That seems like a plot hole lol
Thats what im thinking too like wtf???i hope he doesn’t play it fool until the fl know about it and he shrug it off saying that she doesn’t ask him
I think it's depends on the range, he was outside when seini was getting abused.
I genuinely believe that either he’s going to tell her like in the next chapter or this is the plot is 100% one of those weird ass potholes or they’re gonna explain it away like I can’t pay attention to everything type of situation
I don’t know why the word plot hole that I put in there just decided to not appear, but I meant like it’s 100% a plot hole or not explained properly
I read the novel, he does know and he later tells the fl