"We could interrogate the killer and ask him where he got the poison, but he killed himself after being caught." ~ Wow. This story is just a masterclass in writing >_> Seriously though, if this is how it's actually written in its native language, then why didn't the translator fix it?? I'm really trying hard to enjoy it, but they're making it difficult.
I waited for the official version because I thought it would be written better... but it turns out the unofficial translations did their best with a story that's just not that well written (or the official version just sucks). I like the art and plot and I'm going to continue reading it even though the writing isn't that good. I just change some things around in my head while I'm reading to make it flow better.
That was the worst ending. I saw people commenting on the end before I read it and I was like "nah, surely it can't be that bad." Nope, I was wrong. And even though parts of this story were great, I kind of feel like I wasted my time.
Are Penny and Leo married? She says something about her house and then he says "but you're mine, so it's my house too." But isn't she with the vampire chick?
I don't understand why she loses her noble title and all her wealth just because her house burned down. Banks existed back then, as did insurance. Also, doesn't her husband own a business? From the very beginning she should've just gotten Isaac to help her kill her husband. That would've been way more satisfying.
...The fuck? Kinda seems like the ending of this chapter came out of nowhere. I scrolled back up to make sure I didn't miss anything, cause it seemed so weirdly abrupt that she'd just send him away. And did he even get a chance to tell her about the lady trying to poison her? Wtf? I guess it could be a misdirect and we'll get a flashback later, but it just seems so weird.
I've had this on my list for so long now. I'm happy I finally started reading it. It's really good so far ^_^
Looking for omegaverse stories that take place in a fantasy setting. Yaoi only, no shounen ai. I prefer ones that focus on character and story development, with the sex being secondary. And it'd be great if the two main characters developed a connection first before sleeping together, but it’s not a prerequisite.
"It’s not going in because you're dripping cum everywhere and it's too slippery" ummmmm shouldn't that make it go in easier? The fuck? You can tell the guy who wrote this has never gotten laid.
Omgomgomgomg Holy fuck!!! I thought he was being tortured in a dungeon somewhere. I didn't think he actually managed to get away.
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please come back pleeeaaaaase!!!!
The cover made me think this was a yuri at first (bro looks like he has tits and is wearing makeup at first glance)
But then the way the two kings were staring at eachother made me think yaoi (Bros don't eye rape eachother like that...)
Also, the character designs are a little weird. Why do a bunch of them have these gigantic eyes?
Still though, I'm going keep reading and see what it's about since I like fantasy settings.
Why is ukes passing out after sex such a common occurrence in so many manga/Manhwa?? Like, this dude is young and he's in good shape, so why does he have such a delicate constitution? I can understand getting tired and even dizzy after nutting three times. But, passing out to the point where you don't feel a dick in your ass - that's completely insane. I'm just going to pretend he's under some sort of sleeping spell, otherwise my mind just can't comprehend it.