beta
Is it fucked up that I like this so far? For something that's written by a guy, it's not terrible. Yeah, I wish the writing was a little better (some of the lines are ridiculously cringey), but overall it's decent, and the guy is okay to look at. I don't love the body proportions of the women, but they're still pretty. And while the sex scenes have some ridiculous moments, some of them are hot.