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The art is beautiful. That said, Idk if it was machine translated or if it's just poorly written (or maybe a little of both), but holy fuck. Never have I seen an official translation THIS bad. I checked out the fan translation to see if it's any better. It's not. In fact it's worse. It's a shame to, because it seems like it would be a great read if more care went into the translation (or possibly the writing, as I'm not sure what the issue is here). I just finished chapter 7 and suddenly they switched from calling the protagonist "her" to him, with no buildup or leading into anything. I still don't know if it's a translation issue or what. Apparently the two characters have had sex, but I'm still confused as to whether or not the love interest knows the main character is a man. Because there was no dramatic reveal, so if he found out about it, it was something he learned off screen, and it was never mentioned again.