Erys

I feel like this was supposed to have a lot more, but it got kind of rushed because of the shutdown of the site kind of like I feel like this was supposed to have like another hundred chapters maybe less but at least 50 more because this really hinted at the guy being from that world as well And him like meeting his parents for actual closure not just him going there and being like this is not my home anymore I feel like this was supposed to have a lot more. I don’t know it feels incomplete. It’s good, but it needs more.

I have very mixed feelings about this. It’s kind of was boring, but I was a little curious and then it was kind of a little interesting then boring again. It has very specific traits that make it kind of boring because it’s been overdone in that specific way very often but in others it’s a very well written so it’s interesting. I feel like if only a couple things would’ve been changed from the start. It would’ve been better also affirming why she wants to be a thing to might’ve been good. She wants power to be able to defend herself against absolutely anybody and I understand that and so nobody will ever look down on her or make decisions for her like I understand, but at the same time, I wish it was more affirmed in the story what she wanted that for The romance aspect to make it very boring. I wish it was a little different.