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I feel like there’s missing information and as well as in general it feels like there’s things that are missing.
Like at the start, his reactions, and the way that he went about things just feels a little bit unnatural like the grasp for information wasn’t really there that you would have in that situation . he feels a little bit like a Marionette.
But I didn’t really finish up to the part that everybody is at now wanna come to reading I stopped. Because of this I’m not that far off though from where everybody is.
He a character that like he’s right above water very non-interesting in certain ways like he’s not trying to do anything it’s weird the way that he eats his follows without question without thought if you think about it and
that he feels like he just possessing that body and (even if he is) and not that he possibly just remembered his past life that he doesn’t question himself or that he’s so unattached from all the other characters like his siblings, his parents, even the potential targets. he doesn’t see them like the they are now his family they’re not just this person in this person. They are now his family they see him like that. They will cry for him. He doesn’t see the severity of everything. I don’t think he properly gets it. I know that the siblings can be annoying, but still the fact that he feels so accomplished when he lies to them. Even if to spare their feelings it’s weird.
His actions feels like he’s an adult and other times he’s a child and other times he doesn’t realize that he’s a child it’s very weird weird and he feels like I said before a puppet it’s strange maybe it’s just me, but the author makes me feel like they don’t know how to properly write a BL guy in this specific situation. It’s just not hitting right.
He doesn’t act like a guy. But this is just my opinion. I just wanted to share it but don’t get mad if you think it’s amazing or whatever because it is good it’s just missing something.