I jUsT shot u with A l0vE sHoT's feed

Like am I the only one who thinks this could be such a gem if it was done right, if Jiksar wasn't as crazy , hateful & if rat was truly able to shine brightly as he could well well... (︶︿︶) I wonder if authors don't take feedback while creating something I'm sure this could easily be 9.6 something worthwhile story if It was done right..