This randomly came back to mind a couple days ago and I am soooo happy I decided to reread it omg. There were so many little hints or things I accidentally skipped over that really ties the story into place. I remember the first time I was reading I had a vague understanding of Brett’s personality and the why of his actions but couldn’t explain it or map it onto how/why he reacts in certain scenes but wowwwww everything really was there from the beginning.
I am so happy that the artist decided to continue the story from the previous one shot. You wouldn’t have even KNOWN that it wasn’t supposed to have how many seasons. I always loved Brett and Hayden’s dynamic and being able to understand and see more of these characters? Just MWAH
Honestly I also re read it like 4 times and each time i understand something new in plot which i overlooked god knows why my brain start braining while reading....
And here I was wondering why they weren’t closing off the story…
Tf is up with my emoji being degraded like this??? Ts misogynistic
Submissive and very breedable man out of the way.. am I the only one who feels this has some pacing issues? I’m not sure if I accidentally skipped over some chapters due to the formatting but I feel like even when Han was depressed and he supposedly resigned and they said he wasn’t gonna come back he was just kinda back the next chapter? Like not even one chapter to REALLY mourn? I just feel like a lot of stuff are like thrown at us readers then there’s not much time given to let it marinate a bit you know?
I’ve also noticed that the world isn’t being built very well since they’ve actually resorted to either 1. Pulling the whole explaining while it’s happening where they somehow piece together answers where even readers didn’t have the hints to or 2. Random flashback with no foreshadowing.
I’ll reread soon to check if it’s just me missing out chapters accidentally but otherwise it’s a pretty good story and concept. Really reminds me of chainsaw man especially. Just wished we got more time to truly get to know everyone ands for them to develop. (I understand that the whole point of some of these events happening is that they’re unpredictable and hard to react to due to how fast they’re happening however, it doesn’t change the fact that the relationships between characters could use a bit more developing). Right now the best way I could describe how the story is flowing is that in a game when you see a red barrel you know not to shoot it cause it’s explosive.
Or when you see oddly placed rubbish or furniture it’s a wall the devs created trying to keep you within the boundary. Point is it’s not progressing based off actual character growth but more so because that’s what’s supposed to happen or expected. If you guys understand? Like oh they’ve been friends for 3 years they must be close but there’s no scenes of them ever spending time together so we can only say they’re friends because we’re TOLD that. Maybe it just needs to do more showing instead of telling or I just need to shut the fuck up. There’s definitely progress of course it’s just that some explanations are lacking.
ANYWAY back to that’s man’s waist oh my days and the teeth? HOLD ME BACK-
If ur reading only official chapters then yes there's a chapter missing. You're talking about chapters 30 31 right? Try reading the unofficial version tho it's not comparable to the translation of the official
Thank you!! I’ll have to reread to see what’s up
Likes he’s just so fuckable? Every chapter is just showing off his waist and HIS TONGUE IS ALWAYS OUT. SOMEONE HAS TO HOLD ME BACK. JUST ONCE. JUST ONCE. JUST ONCE. HES GONNA HAVE ALL MY CHILDREN
Cause what was all that truly about??? Like I was finally getting used to the MC’s personality and truly liked it but now he’s just a MAJORRR push over. Like wdym you got DRUGGED and RAPED but yolo
I don’t see anyone mentioning this and I’m not sure if I missed a chapter with how weirdly this is progressing but this is SA. Like nothing is hot about a drug unconsenting party getting forced on. Unconscious people cannot drink tea.
This is the dark side of YAOI. Welcome aboard~!
Highly advise not to read this if you are a high moral person who cannot turn away from justice.
The reason people continue to read this because they both match each others freak.
They're both crazy for each other in their own ways. If it were a normal person, they would have turned away, but NO.
Hayden may look like a green flag, but it's evident that he's just the same as Brett (〜￣△￣)〜
They're both toxics. Hence, ppl are loving to see two toxic partners.
What did you expect omg if you want something fluffy this is not the place
Boooo! You need to leave
hello~ I'm sorry people aren't being too nice, but what they say is true. Readers here don't care about morality like they would if these were real people~ as someone said, it is the dark side and it's fine :) may I advice you to read something like [Our Sunny Days] , [Perfect Buddy], [Spinach Bouquet] or [Semantic Error]? I'm sure you'll find what you're looking for in these~
Unfortunately, this is Brett’s game. Due to manipulation, technically they STARTED out during SA. Hayden thought he graped him during his rut but Brett was having the time of his life. It’s not a healthy relationship. Its toxicity dialed up to 11.
Comments like this are baiting. They read this piece of work knowing it’s abo and having noncon in it and still have the nerve to comment about it like they are concerned with what’s being presented? Let’s be real they don’t care.
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I’ll choose this loser comment to reply to the rest. First and foremost yes I have read and enjoyed the story which is why I am so far in it? Let’s use our brains here. The fact is, no one seems to acknowledge that it is still very much SA regardless of how gay or toxic the characters are. I simply pointed that out but because yall can’t resist getting your dicks (and let’s be frl I know the majority of you have vaginas) wet you want to disregard themes like these when they are presented in favor of ‘oh sex’ ‘oh dick in ass’. If your brain was as big as the boner you have everytime you see two guys kissing you’d also realize I have other comments under this story talking about how in depth in can get. How a lot of the things referenced are forwarding and overall it’s a really good complex story especially for how grey and honestly red the characters are. So no, I don’t want to hear ‘oh you should find stories with green flags’ which I’m not shitting on the person who replied that cause I have read and am enjoying some of the stories they recommended.
Once again, you can enjoy a story while still calling out the things it is very much showing you. It is SA. There’s no excuse for that.
Another comment also referred to the fact that Hayden thought he raped Brett during his rut. YES! And you know what he did after? Prepared him to end up behind BARS! Cause guess what? Rape BAD! Idk why the fact that I call rape out means I have to drop a story and be bombared with the brainless. Let’s all put on our thinking caps people. Find somewhere else to vent too cause I ain’t gonna entertain it.
I’m not reading all that.
There is SA from the beginning and you enjoyed it. I’m surprised you keep coming back for more.