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Cool premise, but rushed and a bit chaotic at times (plot points were mentioned for a second and then no explanation given or not brought up again). Also, suspending disbelief (but most likely done for the plot) that a zombie outbreak was quickly contained in such a small area. The whole time I kept thinking “why do all the characters think the military are coming to save them” or ”do they really believe that the rest of the world outside the university isn’t also in chaos/ overran by zombies?”. Guess I was in the wrong this time. Anyway, wish the romance had a bit more substance. The story needed more time to focus on it building to feel more real and have that special ommf.
Started good, had a nice pace and a simple but cute plot. Then the miscommunication/Overthinking dragged on way too long. Then the resolution happened in the blink of an eye. For the amount of suffering the mc put the ml through the ending should have been much longer. Ml forgave the mc too quickly. All it took was the mc showing up ONCE and crying, lame.