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The FL's character is pretty unique, and that's nice. However, she sees everything like a chess game—that's why she sometimes acts overly logical, in my opinion. At times, it almost feels like she isn’t truly living in that world, but rather playing it from the outside.
For example, in her relationship with Oleg, she's too harsh toward a child who has been constantly beaten by his father and is trying to be kind and eager for love. She doesn't seem to feel any sympathy for him, and she's old enough to understand the situation.
Even though I'm glad to see a strong FL, I wish she showed more emotion. I don't expect her to be maternal or adopt a “love everyone” attitude—but she also doesn’t need to become a machine living only for her goals.