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I like the story overall, but find myself frustrated at times when she's super childish-like not wanting to drink medicine. I think it's because the reader knows that she's 15, but acts 5.
I know it's important that MC is a child and plays a role in everyone meeting one another, but
I actually wish she never regressed instead, so the idea of her being baby-ish made more sense and was more tolerable. The plot would still make sense if she was a regular savvy kid imo.
*Edit
I appreciate the people correcting me and giving insight on the truth of the event and her maturity.
It was confusing to me that the detail of the story ending at her being 15 was added in.
Otherwise, why write just to argue about "my" opinion on what I wish was. It didn't happen, and the story is as it is. Carry on.