i can see why people like this because it definitely wasn't boring but for me, there was so much wrong with this, zeno and kuro ending up together was weird, kuro doesn't even speak like wtf she felt like an animal to me and if there was a warning, that would've been cool... also all the incest stuff played off for laughs near the end was odd. i know it's a common trope in jpn but maybe tone it down LOL if it's gonna be a trope, make it trope, don't just shoehorn it in at the end i wasn't prepared for that bs. oh right and the actual plot, mc was lowkey immature but that was fine, it was the ML that really threw me off. he's still the same guy also i think bertia and og!heronia are supposed to be different, right? but i just can't see that much developmental difference between bertia/ogfl, it felt like ogfl (from the original game timeline) was just in bertia's body and og!villainess bertia was in the new heronia's body. oh and skinny = good, fat = evil (which was insane).
this is manga so i am not surprised. this is fiction so it can exist and i don't think anyone's morality should be judged if they like this. but man, it sucked. wish i could get the time i spent reading this back.
leo (the ML) is genuinely insane bc he went from pointing his sword at a 3 yr old to worrying about said 3 yr old's MOTHER being afraid of lightning / thunder and randomly falling down the stairs?? not the kid but the FL??? she's a grown woman, why would she be afraid.... can't even blame ogfl for being salty about being ditched atp. he's also boring af. the ogFL is clearly being manipulated and but it is so surface-level that it's not even made me curious to see who/what is manipulating her and what their goals are. mainly bc idgaf what happens to leo because he's literally a nothing burger of a character. lukas is very good but he's turning into the 2nd ML even tho he's more interesting than actual ML. love the FL's family, hate her ex husband and his mother, not even bc they're evil but they're just plain. everyone is genuinely uninteresting except mc, her son and ML's friend.
the ML would be far more interesting if this wasn't a second chance type of story. if we had stayed on the original timeline, this story would be so dark and fascinating. don't get me wrong, i like it anyway but making this a realistic manhwa with no going back in time would've given it so much flavour. i wish we could see more of timeline 1's ivorre!
Enjoy the new chapter. Sorry for the poor quality on the cover, idk why that happened.
i fmucking lov vincent urhdhdmsmejkdkd 10/10 character if he was the ml, if he was the mc, if he had his own manhwa, i would reread every fuckfign day im derioudly so iib love w him
lovable characters, hasn't even been a day since i read this in one binge but i miss them all already :')
well, the plot took a weird turn but tbh i took this as a polywin (eugene x cain x herrace were the realest ot3), would've been a better story w/o daniel but he grew on me, wished he became closer to everyone. tbh herrace also wasn't that interesting to me at first but grew on me a lot more than daniel did. ultimately eugene/cain cleared, would've loved an ot3 ending with them but ehhh, i loved the mls and the fl was ridiculous enough that it wasn't off putting.
most iconic quote: "my handsome men! where have you three been?" (passes out)
Just uploaded the new chapter, folks, our fav master-butler duo are finally the focal point of a chapter, think we all missed the witty banter!
Somewhere is written: "Great Detective thinks like Criminals" What it means? We must simulate psychology of our predator and reverse roles of prey and victim. They must become OUR pray and we have to learn how to hunt and spot them. Now, lets make a simulation of predator psychology: Step 1 Pedo finds this site. What are his thoughts? His eyes ......
I'm already making time in my schedule to translate the three chapters (56-58) on my own but if anyone else with more time can, it would be greatly appreciated.
Or if you have 3 dollars to just buy the chapters, that's cool too. (If you're an American, you can even access them for free, just read my notice since the process is a bit convoluted.)
Read the notice and message me for details.
