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Chapter 1 seems promising, didn't wanna judge based on the comments, and tried reading for myself. All I can say is...
MC IS DVMB AS FUCC..
I saw the raws and I READ THE NOVEL..
I was entirely curious on whose the culprit to MCs death. The murderer was the knight (named Elus/Eluce) with short red hair whose obsessed with ML which is also MLs half brother..
ML didn't knew that MC got killed not until MC told him and MC so dumb didn't even told ML who it was when he actually finally knew who stabbed him.. (MC power manifest, he can see in his dreams. Past and Future)
PLUS I FEEL SO BAD TO THE 13 YEARS OLD MC, he didn't get stabbed once but multiple times..it was brutal I wanna torture that moth3rfvck3r for getting jealous over a 13 year old boy..
Elus/Eluce stab MC once and covered him in a white cloth and then stabbed him again and again till the cloth was dyed in red, suddenly the body vanished and the cloth went flat to the ground. (MC returning to earth)
GODD@MN, MOTHERFVK3R MY BLOOD BOILED READING THAT SH*T..
And when I say MC was dumb, Elus/Eluce thought if he couldn't kill MC then he TRIED killing ML by poisoning him.. MC saw it in his dreams in the future and tried saving ML..
When Elus/Eluce lost in the duel between ML, he drank the poisin he was gonna use on ML. And you know what MC ACTUALLY felt sorry and tried to save him coz apparently he had a cure back up incase he was late to save ML. He save that fvccer and said "atone for your sins."
LIKE WTFFF, let d@mn fuccer die...