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Kasiya Del Roman is a soldier crafted to become an assassin. She lost her human emotions long ago an...
I loved the start till she met Ernon, but after that everything started to feel rushed and it went downhill.
There was really no world building or understanding of the characters. We got to know of their past, but there was no sympathy or empathy for them. There was no foundation to their emotions or their actions. The war, which was the whole plot, just felt like it never happened. The characters are supposed to focus on the war, but they're just blushing at Kasia. There was really no need for that harem plot, and I really liked it until she left Ernon the first time....
Also the clothes they wear.... Why do they have hoodies... There was no explanation of the wealth or status of this world, so I'm guessing everyone are rich asf to be wasting fabric on hoodies. Idfk.
Everyone had some depressing or traumatizing childhood, but it was never explored properly. Most of the plot point were just never explained or made to be understandable. Their love story which literally just started suddenly at the end even though there was really no foundation for it considering Kasia was so indifferent to everything... I felt it when she was Etelle, but then it was abandoned. The night lady also, what was up with that. They just slapped on some sobby backstory everywhere.... It had really good potential and art, but in the end it was just an interesting plot with bad execution.