When he popped up from behind the couch, all I kept wondering was how, when, and why. We know he'd never been there before, so why was he suddenly there, right when his brother was trying to ride his boyfriend on that conveniently placed couch he popped up from behind? And why did neither of them ask where the hell he came from? My brain is still stuck there.
yeah that's a pretty convenient plot hole ngl
... the way this author insists on using female anatomy terms or phrases like "impregnate you/me" or "I'll become pregnant" outside of omegaverse and m-preg universes bothers me so much.
“that isn't your ass" “pussy” LMAO
I was giggling so much
I like the pregnancy one is linda manwhore coded
this is actually a very very normal kink in the gay BDSM community called feminization (using phrases like pussy, referring to partners as "princess", etc). it's also widely represented even in gay erotica literatures so yeah. (I'm also not the bighest fan of feminization all in all, but yeah, this isn't really a new thing nor an exclusive thing used by this author, it's common in the gays' kink community)
Do they have their own story? Because i would love to see more of them without them being interrupted by Momo.
It feels like the author is trying to cram as many typical BL plots into one. It just doesn't seem cohesive to me. And the pacing is non-existent. Now I'm only reading to see how it all ends.
just made a dumbass comment and read this and went like THIS. this is what i was trying to say. but you just said it better and more succint lol thanks
Here I am reading this again and I really want a continuation. I want to see Shima get a sibling and I also want to see the Young Master's story. How can you just tease us with those two and leave us hanging? Let them have kids and their kids can have playdates with Aoi and Akane's kids! Just don't let this be the end, please.
No, really. I love this shit. It doesn't happen too often and usually when it does something horrible gets attached to it. I just love domesticated BL. Established relationships, children, being a family, growing old... I love it so much. No need for drama or fancy intricate plots, sometimes the best things are also the simplest things.
Seemed so rushed to me. I feel like Roku's crazy feelings of love for Yu just came out of nowhere. Maybe it all happened off screen (since they aren't main characters) but to me it wasn't really believable. Especially considering the way that Roku/Betty had lived up until that point. Though I guess that's their thing since Yu fell head over heels with breakneck swiftness as well.
FR I was like where did this come from when did roku become head over heels for yuu did I miss a volume somewhere?
Why do so many omegaverse stories not end with pregnancy/babies? I always feel so cheated when that happens.